My thoughts...
Starts out like it could be the intro to a killer rob zombie song, then sort of meanders into an old school industrial song, maybe early KMFDM. Yeah, throw in some German nihilistic ramblings via some distorted vocals and you've got some early KMFDM. Do you sing? You should consider some industrial-style vocals.
Is this song a tribute to early industrial?
Okay, now the song has taken sort of a VNV Nation turn.
I like it, but it's not finished. 4/10 stars.